All Comments on 'Building a Pet Pt. 04'

been waiting a while for #4 and looking forward to #5

Outstanding read, looking forward to the rest of the story, hope this is a long one!!!

...at least it was! I guess you got bored...well, 04 was bad. You had so many directions to go, and you chose, nothing. I know it’s been a while but, you could revisit this one. It’s got a lot of potential and you definitively keep your audience guessing. But this one was a let down. Get that momentum back, you have a knack, haha!