All Comments on 'Burning Desires All Around Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Writing

isn't for everyone

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hmmmmm! what can I say about this?

Summed up in one word, boring.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Write some more! What happened next?

Okay, this needed some editing, but when you're reading sex scenes, you're driven by the eroticism anyway, not the grammar.

And this is one way many of us cuckolds have groomed our wives to let their inner slut out, by role-playing. I followed it up by inviting my best friend over and leaving them alone a lot, to "get some more beer from the store," "use the bathroom," etc. and feigning drunkeness and sleep late one night in the living room. I was soon excitedly hearing the bed frame against the wall as he banged her, hard. Jared turned Marie into a real slut for his cock, and I jack off constantly, thinking about them. I think they are planning a cuckold pregnancy. How lucky can a guy get?

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Silly premise for a story, but I guess cuck authors get desperate for something nasty to write.

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