All Comments on 'Business Trip Ch. 01'

...I had to stop after he offered her another drink especially after barfing in the bathroom a few minutes earlier. You are a very talented writer, this could've developed into a nice seduction story. This should be under the Forced/Rape category...I am sorry just my opinion...

Stop speling gasp as "ghasp!" WTF is that??? Three times?? Really? This could be a good story, but that kind of shit that could be handled with ANY editing is distracting as fuck. Next time, don't submit until you've edited shit like this out and cleaned it up. It's so bad.

Could have had potential, but getting an inexperienced girl drunk and sleazing into her room.... harassment and taking advantage without consent, verging on rape.

Not at all "erotic" by my book

Hoping the week for her will be a busy one. Enjoyed part one

are not erotic.

This story has a potential to grow ahead, chapter wise. Wonder how things will work out in the office once they get back. Best of luck! Just spell check before uploading the chapter.

I'm absolutely SOAKED after reading that. I can't wait for chapter two! And three. And four. ;)

Let's see part 2!!!!

Very good. I like this style of writing. She is taken by force, but not raped. please, write part #2. I can't wait. v

Very good. Ready for part 2

You just made me so wet. Mmhh I need chapter two!

Wow. You know how to write. I'm on edge for part two. I just had the most mind blowing orgasm of my life! I'm ready to cum again. I need part two! <3 a horny slut

Great story. Keep it going.

Can't wait for the next Chapter

Chapter two. Please

Wish I was your intern please give me more

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Perfectly written and very descriptive of what she was feeling. Written just the way I like. Well done!

Write the rest

Readets LOVE this story! It has so far got 92 favorites out of 109,044 views: that's 0.84 faves per 1,000 views, a very solid faves-to-views ratio.

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My first wife did not need to be drunk to go to bed with her boss: she simply was attracted to powerful men in general & her boss in particular. She flirted with such men, sometimes even agressively. I called it a "boss fetish".

She & I were together for 5 years. Luckily for me she left me for another man. (We didn't have any children.)

While I was with her I gradually discovered my voyeur side.

★★★★★ (5)

👍👍

My wife's first business trip was to a trade show. It turned out the only other person on the roster was her big boss to whom she owed a lot (she got spared in 3 rounds of deep cuts, plus she got promoted each time!)

She told me she had reason to believe he wanted to get in her pants. She suggested she should either quit or try to get a doctor's note.

I told her she had to attend the show because it was her job. "You can say no, come what may... You'll be in an unpredictable & complicated situation. No matter what happens you have a home, a husband & two sons to come home to..."

When a girl's traveling on business with her male boss that's her BAPTISM BY FIRE!

(1) Claire is a keeper. Period.

I love Claire's character so much I could fall in love with her. I truly sympathize with her over what she went through while away on business with her unscrupulous boss. What didn't kill her will make her stronger.

(2) Love your story,

gave you a 5.0 (💚💚💚💚💚)!

It was brilliantly written, very very erotic, and totally true to life.

This non-consent/reluctance story is excellent, I gave you a 5 (☆☆☆☆☆)!

Claire relized that in some situations

a girt's gotta do what a girl's gotta do.

For most girls it is a difficult decision.

☆☆☆☆☆ (5.0)!

Claire is a trooper, a team player and a keeper, all in one.

☆☆☆☆☆ (5.0).

5⭐s

★★★★★ [5 (4.75/5=95%)]!

Claire has undergone a baptism by fire.

She is a good girl.

She must not tell her boyfriend what happend.

Claire must not tell her boyfriend what happened to her while away on business.

I love this nonconsent/reluctance sex story, gave you a 5 (❤💚❤💚❤).

Claire is a keeper. Full stop. Period.

I LOVE this non-consent/reluctance story, marked it a 5.0 (100%).

Henceforth her life will seem the same, but essentially it will never be the same: she is richer and smarter for an experience. Sooner or later she will think to herself "shit happens but life goes on."

I wish I were Claire's boyfriend (or husband.)

As someone said earlier, she is a keeper.

👍👍

😊

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 (five)

I am copy pasting an older comment:

"Anonymous - about 2 months ago

Claire is a keeper. Full stop. Period."

Love it: ★★★★★ (5)!

Claire is a keeper (❤)! End of story!

An excerpt from this story:

Quote: He wrapped both his hands in her hair and pulled down. Claire felt he was already deep enough and tried to stay where she was. She was not expecting him to thrust himself deeper into her mouth. When he did, his cock hit the back of her throat making her choke. As she gagged, Dave pulled her lower and thrust again. She felt her throat convulsing as he kept pulling her lower and thrusting into her. She tried to push against his thighs, expecting him to let her go but he did not. She all of a sudden felt helpless again, this older man taking his pleasure from her body, her mouth, without much concern for her. Spit was dripping from her mouth over the base of his cock and her eyes were watering. End quote.

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"macisgreat - about 3 years ago

Well written, descriptive. Loved it

Perfectly written and very descriptive of what she was feeling. Written just the way I like. Well done!"

Love it. Gave you a 5 (4.8 = 96% = A)

As of March 07/22 this story had got

107 faves out of 122.1k views which is 0.88 faves per 1k views (an A+ faves-to-views ratio!)

Excerpt from the story (spoiler alert)

"... Her boss kneeled in front of her and stripped his shirt off. He had a decent body for a man his age but not the kind of guy that Claire would normally give her body to. Yet here she was, her dress balled up around her waist, the rest of her completely naked except for her heels. Her legs were spread wide open, giving him a lewd view of her glistening slit. She stared down at his hard cock knowing it was the only thing that would satisfy her now. She reached forward, grabbing his boxers and pulling them the rest of the way down."

5.0 = 💯% (❤💛💚💙💜) 👍👍!

This story has been very imaginatively con ei ed and masterfully crafted. The author has managed to enter into Claire's mind and we see that whatever she does, she does it reluctantly. She is a complex character.

Here is an excerpt from this story:

Quote:... Claire had seen from her cubicle right across from Dave's office how he treated adversaries at work. To be honest, she was slightly afraid of him and did not want to get on his bad side.... Unquote.

This is a tour de force!

Each paragraph tells us something about Claire and her innermost thoughts and feelings.

The same goes for this excerpt from the story:

"He balled the soaking wet thong up and pushed it into her mouth. She tried to resist at first but quickly gave in to him. She had given herself to him and anything he wanted to do now she would go along with. The lace filled her mouth with the taste of her juices. She rolled her head back, arching her back, moaning at the pervesion of the situation she was in."

🙂

👍👍!

I'm copy pasting an earlier story:

"Anonymous10 months ago

★★★★★ [5 (4.75/5=95%)]!

Claire has undergone a baptism by fire.

She is a good girl.

She must not tell her boyfriend what happend."

I'm copy pasting an earlier comment:

Quote:

Anonymous 11 months ago

(1) Claire is a keeper. Period.

I love Claire's character so much I could fall in love with her. I truly sympathize with her over what she went through while away on business with her unscrupulous boss. What didn't kill her will make her stronger.

(2) Love your story,

gave you a 5.0 (💚💚💚💚💚)!

It was brilliantly written, very very erotic, and totally true to life.

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LOVE this story! Gave it a 5.0

Love it: 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 (five)! This is an excellent boss-fucks-employee story.

This story is a tour de force! It is very very erotic, yet totally true to life.

I'm copy pasting an older comment.

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daddyslittlewoman - about 7 years ago

Incredible

I'm absolutely SOAKED after reading that. I can't wait for chapter two! And three. And four. ;)

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❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ (5)

Seeing as u guys no longer write is it alright to take this over

LOVE IT, BOTH EROTIC AND TOTALLY TRUE TO LIFE.

Kim is a keeper. No ifs or buts. Full stop.