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All Comments on 'Business Trip Encounters Ch. 03'

by Imanok

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Oral RexOral Rexalmost 17 years ago
Some editing problems, I think...

I like the story, but it's spoiled by the lack of quality control when submitting and posting.

FyreHeartFyreHeartabout 16 years ago
Good But needs checking

While this is a good chapter, it definately could use editing and double checking before posting. The double post kinda throws the reader off.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Error in presentation

Story is presented twice in succession.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
THIS IS STORY IS Virtually 1 page but repeated over & Over

This story is in desperate need of editing - almost a misprint so bad.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story, I’ll be dreaming about this for a long time - thanks for the memories or maybe I should say mamories!

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