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All Comments on 'Business Trip Encounters Ch. 03'

by Imanok

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story, I’ll be dreaming about this for a long time - thanks for the memories or maybe I should say mamories!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
THIS IS STORY IS Virtually 1 page but repeated over & Over

This story is in desperate need of editing - almost a misprint so bad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Error in presentation

Story is presented twice in succession.

FyreHeartFyreHeartabout 16 years ago
Good But needs checking

While this is a good chapter, it definately could use editing and double checking before posting. The double post kinda throws the reader off.

Oral RexOral Rexalmost 17 years ago
Some editing problems, I think...

I like the story, but it's spoiled by the lack of quality control when submitting and posting.

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