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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Lost me when her best friend is suddenly involved.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Nice debut ... hope for more

liked Your story. Creative version of public Ds play, reads easily and just begs for more.

In contrast to an earlier comment, the BFF involvement instead of her master does not bother me. Its just another hook to be curious about reading a sequel.

Thank You and best wishes, Simon

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hot!

Hot story, do you fantasize about this being real?

Just a tip maybe: more details would be nice. Describe weather, looks, surroundings, yourself, feelings etc etc. would make this story even hotter!!

confucconfucover 6 years agoAuthor
thank you

For the most part this is a true story.

theMasterBaitertheMasterBaiterover 6 years ago
Excellent!

So happy to see this story published, and I really hope you write another soon... or experience something new and write about it.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Hot and humiliating.

This story is so fucking hot! Is it all fiction or did part of it really happen?

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