by confuc
liked Your story. Creative version of public Ds play, reads easily and just begs for more.
In contrast to an earlier comment, the BFF involvement instead of her master does not bother me. Its just another hook to be curious about reading a sequel.
Thank You and best wishes, Simon
Hot story, do you fantasize about this being real?
Just a tip maybe: more details would be nice. Describe weather, looks, surroundings, yourself, feelings etc etc. would make this story even hotter!!
So happy to see this story published, and I really hope you write another soon... or experience something new and write about it.
Hot and humiliating.
This story is so fucking hot! Is it all fiction or did part of it really happen?