All Comments on 'Busted'

this was different and really well written

Good story and well written. I would of liked it to be a little longer though. Keep up the good writing.

I think this is a very well done first try. It could have had a little more development and been a bit longer. It is well written and held my interest as a reader. Please write more.

I agree with the other comments that it could have maybe been a little bit longer. The story line was great, I love reading stories of men being "Caught". A little more background on the 3-some, maybe you stand in the doorway and remember and take us a bit back through it?

All in all it was a good story though :)

I liked the story it could have been a little longer, but good for the first time.

I hope you have more to write in the future?

The more you write the better you get!

Thanks