All Comments on 'Busted by Molly's Mom'

Great story idea but perhaps a dialog between the participants rather than just a constantly moving brief discription of the sex acts between them. It would add lots to believability and as they call it in the acting field the"suspension of disbelief"

The ideas you have are wonderfully decadent but they need more "style". Just reciting what happens is not as erotic as it could\should be. Please get into their heads a little and make them more than shadow puppets.

This story reads the same as the first installment. Extremely bland writing, with no plot twists, characterization, development of storyline, or anything to keep reader hooked.

Far too fast paced for me.