by rovingphoto1
I, truly enjoyed how you incorporated the true angry emotions of an everyday person faced with a bad situation... than how like any able bodied male made humble! I could have dealt, with a little bit more on the foreplay, butt in the end the CLIMAX was all to life like and put another opening to a well rounded end!
Pretty damn good story and well written. The only thing wrong is that the guy, mad and hot as hell (from the heat) would not have a raging hard on. The rest of the story is great. Oh, and she is a little too pushy for someone that would roll over so easily.