All Comments on 'C.A.T.: Initiation Ch. 01'

that was trulya great start. i was realy drawn in to the story. do not make us wait to long for an update. please!!...trs

I have already read it twice. Please don't keep us waiting for the next chapter

OH MY GOD!!! KILL IT WITH FIRE!!!

Just kidding, this was actually pretty great, please find the time to work on more!

Out-fucking-standing start!

Can't wait for more!

Keep it up, loved the first chapter... I'll be very sad if there isn't a lot more to come.

Nice, very nice. I hope to see more, and would be disappointed not to. You have quite a talent with bringing the story to life. To be honest, I lost myself enough that it took me a second to realize it had ended.

10/10 Best intro to a new story i've read in forever. For the love of god please continue!

Loved how it jumped right into the action. I read chapter three first and was intrigued enough to start at the beginning. Very sexy!

beginnings! and two nice chars.

not bad, there is a couple of word you got mixed up , e.g. women for a single woman.

and once "he" instead of "she" for the dotcor.

Good start I am rereading this