All Comments on 'C.A.T.: Initiation Ch. 01'

Good start I am rereading this

not bad, there is a couple of word you got mixed up , e.g. women for a single woman.

and once "he" instead of "she" for the dotcor.

beginnings! and two nice chars.

Loved how it jumped right into the action. I read chapter three first and was intrigued enough to start at the beginning. Very sexy!

10/10 Best intro to a new story i've read in forever. For the love of god please continue!

Nice, very nice. I hope to see more, and would be disappointed not to. You have quite a talent with bringing the story to life. To be honest, I lost myself enough that it took me a second to realize it had ended.

Keep it up, loved the first chapter... I'll be very sad if there isn't a lot more to come.

Out-fucking-standing start!

Can't wait for more!

OH MY GOD!!! KILL IT WITH FIRE!!!

Just kidding, this was actually pretty great, please find the time to work on more!

I have already read it twice. Please don't keep us waiting for the next chapter

that was trulya great start. i was realy drawn in to the story. do not make us wait to long for an update. please!!...trs