All Comments on 'Cabin Fever'

by Dar_Jisbo

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Nice story

Where can I go skiing? Great story. I enjoyed it. This is a dream of mine. Never been with a T girl, but always wanted to

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good Start, But Could Be Great.

This has the makings of a good story, however the dialogue seems a bit dry and wrote. Additionally, for someone who has abandoned society, Heidi seems very welcoming to our stranger.

mammoetmammoetover 6 years ago
liked it a lot

but it should have been a lot longer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Heidi was a lot more lonely than she thought. Computers and TV can't replace a warm body next to you in bed holding you.

Floydman1Floydman1over 6 years ago
Good start

I liked it overall, I did. But the dialog was pretty stilted and it could've used a lot more detail.

dca5347dca5347over 4 years ago
Could have been longer

The story was too short,I wanted it to continue further,but it was a nice read.

Royse69Royse69almost 3 years ago

this was very good borderline great

it was a loving romance, it could have gone on for at least one or more pages.

it didnt have to be all sex, just them getting to know each other. kisses between each other.

very good

Thank you

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