by Dar_Jisbo
Where can I go skiing? Great story. I enjoyed it. This is a dream of mine. Never been with a T girl, but always wanted to
This has the makings of a good story, however the dialogue seems a bit dry and wrote. Additionally, for someone who has abandoned society, Heidi seems very welcoming to our stranger.
Heidi was a lot more lonely than she thought. Computers and TV can't replace a warm body next to you in bed holding you.
I liked it overall, I did. But the dialog was pretty stilted and it could've used a lot more detail.
The story was too short,I wanted it to continue further,but it was a nice read.
this was very good borderline great
it was a loving romance, it could have gone on for at least one or more pages.
it didnt have to be all sex, just them getting to know each other. kisses between each other.
very good
Thank you