All Comments on 'Cabin in Montana Ch. 01'

It was great, I like your writing...the plot seems to be interesting too, there is a lot of possibilities where you can take the story. Keep writing, I'd like to hear more about George and Terry

Good start you should keep the story going , a bit more description of the sex and some more build up of the lovers .

I give it five stars conditional on the authors promise to expand the story to a series detailing more adventures of these two lovers.

I also give you 5 stars because of the good start and the promise of more chapters to this story.

The story was brilliant; everything was brilliant - except for your need to translate everything into metric. Who CARES if ten centimetres translates into four inches. NO ONE. Just get on with it!!!!!!!!!!!