All Comments on 'Cael's Star'

AWww shucks....I still get the fuzzies when I read this story. Cael is so gentle and loving towards his "little love".

Just like all happy readers before me, please continue with this beautiful story.

Smiles

My B/f's nickname is Kael and I love this story. Makes me feel like I'm Star and He's Cael and all these things are....well, you know. So, in the intrest of one who LOVES vampiric romance, MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!

Katrina Thiessen-Beasse

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You haven't revealed just what he left out. It makes the story feel unfinished.

First off, you are a brilliant writer! I was hooked from your opening description of Star; you use some beautiful language in your story!

Secondly...

Write more! I agree with others in that you don't reveal what he left out, so I would love a sequel.

But definitely kudos; you presented vampires in a whole new light, a very unique story, and I really felt strongly while reading it!

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Thanks for sharing!

I love your writing. I would love to hear more about these two.

WRITE MORRRRRREEEEE

I have enjoyed this story and wish you had finished it! She needs to move into his house so she doesn't have to wait for the sun to go down before he sees her and she should become like him and so they can be together for eternity! Just a thought but you left so much unsaid and going by the rest of the comments here we all want more!!!!!!

Cael's Star is one of my favorites on this site, I wanted to ask you for more, but I read your bio and instead I say-I'm glad you have survived your illnesses and keep getting stronger and keep blessing us with your writing,

Peace

I am new to your work - I only came across this story tonight but I love it. It is so well written and such great detail.

I really fell in love with your characters, they are so well rounded. I really hope that you write more of Cael's and Star's story in the future.

I read your Bio and I am so sorry to hear that you have been so sick. You must be extremely proud of yourself to be getting back to this after so long (if you arent you should be!!). I will definitely be checking out your website after I have had some sleep.

Thanks for the great story, I look forward to your future work. Good luck and good health

looove it!!!!!!!!!!!! keep it up!

That was so sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet.

I loved the story about Cael and Star, and i hope that you write some more about them!=D Love Carrie from Sweden.

I would most definitely love to here more about Ceal and Star.

another round of Cael and Star would be most appreciated

I would love nothing more than for you to write more about these characters.

I love your style of writing as well as your other story "Paint Me".

PLEASE continue Cael and Star's story. :)

There are very few stories with the "Vampire" theme that get me interested, especially on Literotica, but this one is definitely an exception to my general dislike of the whole business. This was a beautifully written story with wonderful, inviting and mysterious characters...and might I add, an almost cruelly inhuman cliff hanger.

I do hope that you write more of this and don't leave us all wondering what that little thing in the back of his head is that he isn't telling Star.

...so much better than the usual “little one”.

intrigued by cael’s “i just was thinking of spending the rest of my life with you”.

enjoyed this tale very much, would like to see more of this pairing.

more please ;0)

The most realistic of all the vampire stories I have read on this site.

The only problem is that now I don't so much want as *need* more.

I love the storyline so much, but girl, the grammatical errors bother me. :( Please don't be offended, I really do love your story. Write more, it's wonderful. :)

PLEASE give us more of this story!

I really Need more. I loved reading this and I would love to read more about them.

more more more more more and more!!!!!!!!!

mooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee pppllleeaasseee!!!!!!!!!!

they make a very intersting couple and would like to see how this plays out!

Loved it, more please

I love your non-human tales. You write so eloquently. I am curious about the "born a vampire" details - was kind of hoping Cael would tell it to Star before the end. I can only hope you will continue to write & post more of these types of stories.

I loved this! I am excited for the continuation of the story of Cael and Star!

This story was wonderful! I look forward to the development of Star as a vampire's companion and a little bit of background on Cael.

More. This is a bitchin' story that needs to be developed in more detail. And more on. Cael too that would be nice.

Great story give me more!

I love the story so far! it is a great story line and I can't help wondering what he is holding back.... possibly something about her living longer even though she won't become a vampire?

please please please finish it

please!!!!!! I'm begging you to write more this is awesome I am in love with this story please please please

More z!!!

You definitely should continue their story. Was a lovely read. Enjoyed it tremendously :)

More please love this story keep up the good work.

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Amazing story and would love to read more.

I love this cute story of yours. Please continue :D

I loved this story, and the route it took, the emotions, it was well written and i enjoyed it very much...i hope i enjoy your others as much :) angel

I absolutely loved this story!

In my opinion its so unique and well written...

Please continue Cael & Star's romance!!!!

I am giving it 5 stars because its awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!

:) <3 <3 <3

This is such a well written story. Please come back and write more.

If he was born.... Can she get pregnant? There is so much more of this story to tell....

This is a great story please write more soon

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I haven't read a well written story like this in a while. Please continue this, I cannot wait to read the next part.

This is a great story I hope u continue with it!!

Ok, I just have to say, this was one of the best stories I have read ( and Iv read a lot). Not only was the story interesting, you know how to write which makes the story that much more interesting. I really hope you continue on with this, the story just... I just wan to find out more about Cael and his story and what's going to happen with star and how their relationship will turn out. I just love it! Love the story, love you, love star and Cael!

It's a wonderful story but it was written in July of 2003 I doubt the Author will add to Cael's Star.

LOVED YOUR STOREY AND YOUR WRITING. GREAT CHARACTERS. IT MIGHT BE NICE TO MAKE MORE OF THE STOREY ABOUT THEIR RELATIONSHIP NOW. THANKS SO MUCH.

amazing Story about love between a Girl and a Monster.:) the verbal Exchange between them is written in a very sweet way. i find it sad though that she will die as a human and he will have to live without her...or will she insist to be a Vampire too?:)

Good start. Please continue Cael's star!!!

This has the makings of a great story. Please find a credible editor to help you with grammatical errors, and it will help the story flow better.

very interesting thus far. please proceed

This is the perfect story! I just love how you feel a connection with the characters and you can just picture them doing everything. From simply standing or their naughty bits. That was soooo yummy to my mind and would love for you to write more. This is now my favorite story on Literotica. I couldn't stop reading it!

With the exeption of him say many times I didn't wish to hard you it felt nice, but he should have visited her a few times before he take her.

Even so it is a very good story that it left the feeling of the need to continue.

I would love to read more of this. It's well written with dynamic characters that beg to be explored more

I'd like you to continue the story. What didn't he tell her? How will she continue to change?

You can’t just leave it like this.

I very much enjoyed this sexy story. If you have not already, please write more about Cael and Star.

Could use some editing, but I like the story and would enjoy reading more!

Please continue Cael and Star's story. How do Star's abilities continue to develop and how does their relationship dynamic work?

Omg, PLEASE continue this story!! It's AMAZING!!

This is sooo hot. I just love when he break in and force hisself on the girl. Telling her that she don’t want him to leave. What a crock of shit. Taking a girl scared out of her mind is what does it for you? No depth here at all. Nothing wonderful about this story.

Very good read. Sweet and sensual.

Came for the porn, but instead found a story with emotions in a fantasy world made so realistic by the author. More!

Sexy

I enjoyed this story very much. The character of Cael is intriguing, sexy and kind with a dangerous edge. He’s fascinating. I liked how gentle he is with her. I found Star somewhat annoying as she runs hot and cold at a moments notice and can’t seem to make up her mind as to whether she likes him, loves him or resents him. Good writing though.

Beautiful story, I’d really love to hear more of Star & Cael. I’ve got a few unanswered questions but mostly I just want more of their relationship.

Incredibly hot!

A very well written story.Would love to read of these two.