All Comments on 'Calculated Moves Ch. 09'

by Niki526

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minxxxkittenminxxxkittenalmost 9 years ago
YASSS BRILLIANT

THANK YOU FOR COMING BACK ! And a HOT AND AWESOME CHAPTER ! Fucking love your writing and this story !! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP

DarkhimeDarkhimealmost 9 years ago
I am so happy you updated

I've been reading this story since the day you posted it and I'm truly thrilled that you didn't stop writing. I loved the idea of this story and its head me captivated since day one

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
YAYYYY

Im so glad you posted again ! This story is really good and im interested to see where you take it from here, please post soon !!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great!

Great job. At first when skylar woke up in NY and was dreaming I got mad at her for her behavior. I was relieved when it was a dream. I hate it when a character immediately falls in love, especially when she has been abused. If you need any help editing let me know. Briellekennington@gmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Amazing story!! Pls keep writing it and update soon! I'm dying to see what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Nikiiiiii!!!!

You did it again, girl!!

I'm glad you still continuing this story!!

I can't with Jamie, James or whatever his name is.

This story is intoxicating STAT!!!

When will you update?

Amanda

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Niki526Niki526almost 9 years agoAuthor
Hiii guys

Thanks for your positive comments and feedback...lol some of your feedback... jaw dropping stuff. I’m glad you liked this chapter.

To anon: Great

I have your email address saved safely on my phone. I will contact you as soon as my next chapter is done. Thank you so much for offering your assistance.

To Amanda

I’m loving your enthusiasm. Jamie...James, either one, both sounds sexy to me, lol. As for when I’ll update...hopefully soon. I promise not to leave you guys hanging for too long.

Take care everyone

Niki

M1dn1ghtM1dn1ghtover 8 years ago
Add Chapter #10

I love the story, please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Upload chapter 10 please!

When are you uploading the next chapter??? I'm dying to find out what happens next TTplease please please upload soon!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Please upload the next chapter...its been so long!

Niki526Niki526over 8 years agoAuthor
I'm so so so sorry for the delay

I hate making you guys wait! I already decided on how the next chapter pans out but, lol I'm hiding my face when I say this, it's now just the case of writing it out, life's getting in the way at the moment so I haven't written that much...so upsetting. Anyway I'm planning on making the next 7 chapters be about each day of their week together so it's gonna be fun! Lol I promise I'll make each chapter long and hot!

Please be patient with me, i didn't give up on the story but it's gonna be awhile before the next chapter is up, I'm so sorry.

Take care everyone

Niki

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
chapter 10

I was wondering about when you were going to upload the next chapter I don't get on here very often but this story really caught my attention and I didn't want to miss the rest of the story

Niki526Niki526over 8 years agoAuthor
Hey anon: chapter 10

Thank you for your comment and your feedback...if that was you, you reminded me about Calculated Moves, lol i almost forgot. I'm just got on mid term break so I'll have some time to write out chapter 10, i think writing would be a good distraction at the moment. I'll try to finish it soon so maybe it will be up during the week to come so since I'm just gonna be typing it out and submitting...I won't be finding an editor and stuff like that, i dont have time to find someone, so those of you who get really annoyed with all my errors and mistakes please don't read the chapter, i don't want to waste your time. I hope its good enough though. Thank you anon.

As always take care everyone

Love

Niki

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Yes!! I'm so excited! Patience has never been my strong suit so I don't mind a few grammar probs if it means I get the next chapter quicker. Jamie has really drawn my attention on really interested in what he does next he seems unpredictable nice one min abusive the next it makes me wonder what is going through his mind that makes him make the choices he does thank you keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Where is the next chapter???

When is the next chapter coming??? I literally cannot wait so pls do upload it soon!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

If you have any mercy on the souls of your readers, you will post the next chapter ASAP! I don't mean to come off as rude but this story is perfection and Ive been waiting over a month since I discovered this existed!

Niki526Niki526over 8 years agoAuthor
Lol you know mercy is for the weak right...

Lol I'm just kidding, I'm almost done, other stuff came up so I write bits and pieces everyday, i got the night of day 1 left to write, this is the most important part so I've to get it right, lol, and then the chapter will be good and ready to go. Thank you for your patience guys. I'm making it really fun with a little darkness so I hope you like it.

Talk to yourl soon

Niki

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
chapter 10

Any luck with the last part of chapter ten?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Pls upload next chapter

Is there any hope that new chapter will be up soon?? I'm dying waiting

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I think she says on her bio page that she has a lot going on right now to publish the 10th chapter....I know bummer!

Niki526Niki526over 8 years agoAuthor
Chapter 10!!!

Hi guys

Hope you all are well

I just submitted chapter 10 so watch this space it's should be up in the next couple days, let me know what you think of it. I'm so sorry about the delay.

Take care

Niki

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Its weird that the next chapter is not up yet, even though you submitted it?

Niki526Niki526over 8 years agoAuthor
Lol I did submit the chapter!

It's nice to know you're looking forward to the next chapter. 

But lol I'm peeping from the corner of my wall when I tell you this, the chapter was rejected on Thursday night due to format issues. I sorted it out and resubmitted it on Friday morning...so annoying I know. I'm sorry it's not up as yet, I wish I could quicken the process, the chapter is still awaiting approval. Lmao if one more thing delays this chapter, I'll just stab someone.

So fingers crossed it will be up soon!

Niki‎

Amy_2_3Amy_2_3over 1 year ago

When I re read this story again and again. I dont know if this is my illusion or not. But I feels like he loves her. Dont know how to express his love. But sadly.. she dont love him. Which is sad for both but totally understandable on her side.

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