by KnottLynnHardey
Loved the story, very well thought out and written. Is it going to continue? Please?!
7years on literotica, the first story I kept on reading even after I climaxed :) interesting story
That last anonymous comment is about the best compliment I could get on here. My writing was interesting enough to keep reading post orgasm! Huzzah!
I tend to go for the shorter stories and when I saw the disclaimer at the beginning re: it being more a long story with as much sex as possible thrown in, I almost skipped past it. I am thrilled that I read on. After years of reading, it's the first time I've felt the desire to comment - it was that good.
Excellent story through and through. I'm a bit of a grammar snob and caught a couple mis-spelled words and misplaced commas, but not enough to pull me from the story or even remember where they were. I sincerely hope you keep writing, I'm looking forward to reading more!
I'm a bit of a utilitarian on literotica, but this was a really engaging story and effective to boot. Great job! PLEASE keep writing!
And I would have really liked a sequel. I wonder if you're alive.