by Kristofe
I really enjoyed this! I'm so excited for chapter 2...bring it on Daddy.
Vivi
If I could make one suggestion, it would be that you asked someone just to check for spelling and grammatical errors... Other than that, 5* and I look forward to the next chapter, thank you.
Jules
Please do not stop writing! I'm going to be a big baby here, but everytime I get attached to a character such as here-the author always stops writing, so I beg you. Please continue.
Other than a few grammatical errors it was perfect. I loved it. Ready for chapter two!
This is a Beautifully crafted introduction to a novel way to find and begin with a new sub. This is the hardest part of our lifestyle--getting connected, clearing the air, and beginning training in a non-threatening manner. Get hot, tet writing--bring on the Second Chapter!
You've done brilliantly capturing the Dd/lg dynamic in an unthreatening way and made me feel much more comfortable about my Little leanings. Thank you for such an amazeballs story!
This story and Your defining the true nature of a real DD/lg relationship was fantastic. Most of us are not as lucky when we first start out to such clear and tthoughtful introduction and guidance. Thank You for sharing. God bless.