by ZinaHeaven
Wish this chapter would have been longer. Seems to be a great start to something that could be wonderful.
Please do continue, but don't feel the need to rush the story...it has potential;-)
I look forward to the real action in what can be a very good story. Great start please continue quickly
I've been checking periodically for the next Chapter... What happens next?
wow now this one has the makings of a great story! to bad it ended so soon into it!