All Comments on 'Call Me Sir Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Nice start. I never got that when I had to stay late.

PinkPantheressPinkPantheressalmost 11 years ago
Short but great start

Wish this chapter would have been longer. Seems to be a great start to something that could be wonderful.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
A promising start

Please do continue, but don't feel the need to rush the story...it has potential;-)

fishingrod48fishingrod48almost 11 years ago
Good Prologue with great potential

I look forward to the real action in what can be a very good story. Great start please continue quickly

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

tease...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Please?!

I've been checking periodically for the next Chapter... What happens next?

CherieA0221CherieA0221over 9 years ago

wow now this one has the makings of a great story! to bad it ended so soon into it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
More chapters

Please

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