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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Stab wound to the liver is bad luck not good

The liver bleeds a lot when stabbed. It is involved with cleaning your blood supply and you will bleed out faster from a liver wound that one to almost anywhere but the heart a major artery or kidney. It is definitely not a lucky place to be stabbed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
I LOVE this story

Hello. I love this story. I love Ruth and Tom exploring rope (that is so very hot) and Ellie is showing so much growth.

One small thing is that knitting needles don't stab you. They aren't sharp. You can get calluses from rubbing, but not bleed from a jab. They are not like sewing needles. =)

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Hey, I'm the guy behind the stories. I chose the name CaringAndDemanding because the multiple facets of sexual control are what interests me most when it comes to erotica, whether it be in BDSM or Ds setting, or in a noncon/reluctance setting. When I write a story, I want the...

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