All Comments on 'Camp Breakfast'

Short on detail.

Homophobe alert (one who is ashamed of his homophobia, apparently, as is a "closeted" commenter).

Just dump your shit wherever you happen to be squatting. Like you need to be told that.

A truly loving wife will do anything for her husband (wink, wink, nod, nod) and in the case of my story there were two loving wives who generously allowed their husbands to have sex with other people. What more could you want.

Oh, and the author is not a "fag"; she is a woman!

So, you may awkwardly grovel your way back into your closets now.

I think this story needs something else as a build up to the camp sexual romps. This story left me unmoved. Sorry but you are a better writer than that, so I could only mark this as a "could do better" in my teacher mold. (but then again I am not actually a teacher so don't take it to heart)

Another asshole brings his gay fetish to LW.