All Comments on 'Camping'

What a nothing happening story.

The minute he stands in front of her, she kneed him in the balls. Now this isn't a movie. When a man gets kneed in the balls he goes down. I think she kicked him in the head and he was out cold. She took everything, including his clothes, turned around and followed their tracks to safety, leaving him to die in the woods alone.

This is a good start to a story. I'm ready for the next chapter!!

Really creative story idea. More please?

I really get angry and disappointed with authors who leave stories unfinished. I end up ignoring them as it's pointless investing time in reading them :(

That may have been a beginning for a story but where is the middle and the end

It is not even that a story just a few jumbled lines put together badly

Pretty cringy. I like to think I've evolved over the years, if only a little. Perhaps I will return to this someday