All Comments on 'Camping Trip Ch. 01'

There has got to be more....

More like an opening paragraph. And the animals in the woods are not going to be happy, to say nothing of other campers. UGH!

For a first chapter, this doesn't entice me to read more. I suggest that perhaps you explain more of your characters' origins and what's actually going on. I had trouble following all of them and the chapter moved pretty quickly.

She doesn't get to take a shower or use the bathroom? Brian doesn't deserve a girl or a pet.

I really liked it. I would love to see more chapters.

Fucking awesome. Can't wait to read more

Maybe my thorough dissatisfaction with this "story" is that I thought that non-concencentual meant sex. The author is writing non-con restraint. Being tied up or confined to a cage is certainly NOT sex. If it was, men in prison would never want to get out. No back stòry. Hell, no front story! Sorry. Go back to your computer and try again.