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All Comments on 'Captain Terdy's First Week: Day 01 PM'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
The illustrations

We're quite good. Using poser can sometimes be pretty lame but your use of facial expressions and good angles was refreshing. The story was okay too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
The Humour keeps on coming

Very good you have managed to keep the humour level up and not make the story bland.

Still a 5.

jetoshjetoshover 6 years ago
Blast Off!

Really enjoying the series & looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Extra illustrations vs. Smashwords?

Hi --- this is great, and I got the Smashwords edition to read more, but it seems like that has only a sub-set of the pictures here. Will there be a fully illustrated e-book at some point in the future?

Thanks for the great work!

HollisChesterHollisChesterover 6 years agoAuthor
Yes Anonymous

Yeah, Smashwords won't accept most of the illustrations. But rest assured they are all done and every chapter is now queued up here waiting for Literotica's processes to grind.

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