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All Comments on 'Captured'

by MercurialLix

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rdoolittlerdoolittleabout 12 years ago
Is there more?

It seems your story began with the first chapters missing. Sometimes a build up can pay off. Maybe some back fill?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Small Detail

A sniper? Really? seems a bit out-there and unnessecary

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Very HOT!

The sniper part didn't bother me since you can tell it was added to increase the apprehension/fear. It was HOT and I wish I had a Domme to take me that way!

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