All Comments on 'Captured: The Sheik's Bride'

I love this story, great plot line so far! keep up the great work! please continue the story soon!

Love it so far. Can't wait for the rest.

i found your stories and enjoy your writings so far...Thanks for sharing your talent with us and look forward to reading on, i see the length of time inbetween your chapters and started at this one i hope you can write more often i really enjoy this story so far...of course i do understand that thing called *life* that interferes with writing etc...hope all is well with you and yours and you have a Merry Christmas, happy holidays. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

That...story...was...absolutely...terrific...LOVE IT. I have just now become a big fan of your writing and I hope to hear soooo much more.

Sincerely

A BIG FAN

Storyline is compelling. Characterization is good, but you need some help with grammer. "ahead of the slave orginazation" (sic) should be "the head of" preferable, "the slavers." I love great stories. You could get published in print if you watch the grammer usage.

YOU'LL ATTRACT FEWER BUYERS