All Comments on 'Carlotta's Captivity'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
this is a great story so far.

Please, keep writing. : )

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
wrong category

this is BDSM, too raunchy, she is just scared, no pleasure for her.

kiwiplumkiwiplumover 11 years ago
Wrong

Not sure what anonymous means, this is in just the right category, she's not consenting and is reluctant.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Extremely explicit, but it was still rape, regardless of the contract. Not very erotic.

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