All Comments on 'Carmen and Sergei'

I like the little tease at the end. Very effective.

Good story.

I am sorry as you are a decent writer, but this should have been categorized as Gay Male. As a straight person, I did not enjoy it and wish I hadn't read it all hoping something useful to a straight person would occur.

Guy on guy stuff really does it for me (I don't know why...must have something to do with my feminine gender)

Anyway, I loved everything about that story and a sequel would be much appreciated...maybe something with Jesse taking more control.

A nice little bisexual romp, with good characterizations. Thanks for sharing. best, Ken

I totally disagree with the comment about categorization-that wasn't gay or straight, it was a beautifully written story of people having a delicious encounter. I found it intensely erotic and hope you keep writing

Different strokes for different folks. I agree that this should have been in gay sex or bisexual. Sorry. Thanks for the read.

I thought this was an interesting take on the situation he found himself in. I agree with others catagorization was dubious. I thought it was confusing at times as to the positioning of the characters...whether it was the writing I couldn't be sure...maybe needed a little editing.