by LazyDreamy
I thought this was an interesting take on the situation he found himself in. I agree with others catagorization was dubious. I thought it was confusing at times as to the positioning of the characters...whether it was the writing I couldn't be sure...maybe needed a little editing.
Different strokes for different folks. I agree that this should have been in gay sex or bisexual. Sorry. Thanks for the read.
I totally disagree with the comment about categorization-that wasn't gay or straight, it was a beautifully written story of people having a delicious encounter. I found it intensely erotic and hope you keep writing
A nice little bisexual romp, with good characterizations. Thanks for sharing. best, Ken
Guy on guy stuff really does it for me (I don't know why...must have something to do with my feminine gender)
Anyway, I loved everything about that story and a sequel would be much appreciated...maybe something with Jesse taking more control.
I am sorry as you are a decent writer, but this should have been categorized as Gay Male. As a straight person, I did not enjoy it and wish I hadn't read it all hoping something useful to a straight person would occur.