All Comments on 'Carnal Interlude'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

well told, well paced - dialogue was overall true. Keep on writing. You've got the muse!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
the details tripped my trigger

i love when an author describes something i have felt but couldnt put into words.

Baloo the BearBaloo the Bearabout 20 years ago
um... wow

Extremely powerful visuals - very passionate... just wow!

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