All Comments on 'Carnaval'

So very close to an excellent story! My main problem is the switching back and forth between sisters. The action isn't radically different, so having two of them is more annoying than interesting or exciting.

Raoul and Ramon are not common Brazilian names. Raoul would be more probably be spelled Raul, and Ramon while it might occur is pretty much a Spanish name. There are Ramons in Brazil but they would be rare even if the Brazilian are capable of going to odd/unusual names.