All Comments on 'Carol's School Tales Ch. 15'

by SylviaG

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tinysaratinysaraabout 16 years ago
END OR NEW BEGINING

LOVE THE ENDING AND AM GLAD JIM GOT HIS JUST DESSERTS HAVING LOST BOTH HIS DAUGHTER AND WIFE. JUST CURIOUS IS THIS THE END OR JUST A NEW START IN MISS NORRIS LIFE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
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Great story! If your next story is just as good count me in.

kimfos1977kimfos1977about 16 years ago
Good Ending

Thanks for the story. The ending was a little "happy" for my tastes, but it was well done. Thanks for the good story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Good!

I Wish the real Becky got her just deiserts, but maybey the baby cood doo that.Ah I know,why dont you have a story of Becky kid at 18 and have it meet Carol at school!(I say it becaus I don't know wether it's a boy or girl.)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
ASOLUTELY BRILLIANT

Read the whole lot over two days-loved it

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 5 years ago
Marvellous

I just finished binge reading the 15 parts of your story and it is a well thought out story, well paced, and well written. Plus, I loved the ending! 75 stars from me. -- JB

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