- BDSM
- Carpe Noctem Pt. 01
- Page 2
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Click hereNearly losing his mind he growled as he began to swell and harden even more.
I felt him swell and worked my tongue hard along him as he started jerking in and out of my throat, until he flooded my throat and mouth with cum. I was more prepared for this one and swallowed without choking on it all. He kept cuming and cuming as I continued to suck and swallow.
The feel of her throat closing around his cock triggered new spurts until he was shaking with the effort, god her mouth was lethal! And knew why his partner had still been hard, because he too, was still hard!
He pulled my head off his cock and hauled me up to kiss me.
The taste of her mouth mixed with the taste of his semen made him groan again. "Thank you," he whispered in her ear when he managed to drag himself away. His partner announcing the end of the gig and the wild applause pulled him back to the here and now. He let her go as he yanked his pants up and did them up before yanking his shirt down, and yes he had a hell of a wet patch to cover. He loved it.
"How did you get here?" he demanded to know.
"I got their courtesy bus," I replied.
"Good, we don't have to worry about an extra car. You're coming home with us." He told me.
I quivered at his words, I couldn't believe this Dom was interested enough in me to take me home with him. I frowned, he'd said "With us".
He tilted my chin up so I was looking him in the eye. "He is my partner, we live together, do you understand what I'm saying?"
"You, you're bi? Both of you?" I questioned. It had never crossed my mind that this Very Dominant man could be bi, I'd only ever seen him with women.
"Yes, we are." Was his curt reply and he was surprised at the slow smile that spread across her face.
"How perfect!" I purred... "I love bi-sexual men and a very strong Dom to boot! Jackpot!" I said as I chuckled.
It was his turn to be stunned. Maybe they'd found the woman they had been searching for for so very long. Why the hell had he ignored his own gut feelings for so damned long!
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Thank you for taking the time to read my story. I hope that you have enjoyed the first part, there is more to follow.
Please feel free to leave comments. I truly appreciate the feedback. Unykorn
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- COMMENTS
Unykornalmost 8 years agoAuthorI am glad that you like this chapter and hope that you enjoy Part Two as well. I appreciate your comments and feedback. Unykorn
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoI am really starting to like your writing. I'm putting you in my "favorite authors" category.
Beautifully explicit and detailed. Describes the feelings as well as the erotic details
Kantariialmost 8 years agoHoly shit! You snuck a couple new stories in on me that I haven't had a chance to read.... Guess I need to get hot reading them to catch up👠👠👠Kant.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoEven with the editing issues, this got me all shivery and hot. I am hooked by the characters and the plot. Love realistic people. Love me some mfm with that surprise you tossed in. Liked the balance of privacy within a public place. One's fun does not have to become cheap entertainment for the masses. I will be watching for the next chapter.
PS. It would be worthwhile to do the edit and polish on this chapter and then resubmit and ask the Lit folks to replace this original. This deserves to be it's best.
You might tag for the surprise as that is a significant twist.
Unykornalmost 8 years agoAuthorI appreciate your feedback and the comment. I did do a big edit on this before I submitted it, changed it from being a third person narrative. By the time I was finished it was getting late and I was getting very tired so I rushed it. Which, unfortunately, shows. The second part of this story has been submitted and should show up in a couple of days. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Unykorn.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoA truly sexy & stimulating story. However you are in serious need of an editor. Can be confusing when pronouns are wrong. Also, I think tbere could be a better way of switching back and forth between speakers. I liked hearing both of their perspectives, but the way it is written is distracting. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
