All Comments on 'Carrie's Punishment Pt. 01'

by Masterdamon88

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Name changes

Unless I did not know how to read your story the sub's name was first Katie and then changed to Carrie. I thought it was very descriptive and it did keep me reading although the name change had me going back and checking. I thought when she used the safe word punishment was done, but the end indicates that they have only started. Please write more to clear this up and continue with your story.

Masterdamon88Masterdamon88about 8 years agoAuthor
Edited...

Thank you for bringing this up. I did a little editing and rewriting. So here is the still being updated copy.

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