All Comments on 'Casualty of Chance Ch. 04'

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Good writing ability, but too much sex and not enough story. No real emotional content. Getting boring.

This started out real good, got bad then became awful. NO Story.

then got worse

You write bad smut, get a life and a woman before its too late. Fall in love with a woman than tell me you want to see her made into some niggers slut.

Isn't ironic the post below utters a racial epiteth about a story that's clearly marked in the 'interracial section'..strange that someone with those social leanings would stumble into that particular section and then feel the need to drop a dime...Dude you might want to clean off the cum you spurted on your keyboard while reading the stories in this section before it dries between the keys..

Can hardly wait to read the next chapter (kinda' don't want the series to end)!

He loves those big niggers taking his women, stright, I don't fucking think so.

little-dicked wimps - this is a hot series, good work, as usual