All Comments on 'Catching Mommy: Creating a Slut'

Can't wait! I hope she "plays Olivia" to the tune of shoving 10+ inches of bitch-taming strap-on up Olivia's ass! That elistist bitch needs to pay!

Love it!

only one problem, the chapters are too short lol, need to know rest ASAP

Yet another great story that keeps the readers, including me, begging for the next chapter. Please don't make us wait too long!!

Great stuff, though try and make the chapters a little longer please, the suspense is agony ;-) xx

Wow friggin hot relly need more right away.

Too bad it's onlt 2 pages at a time. It takes so little time to read.

I can't wait to see how she'll play Olivia.

a new favorite series by my favorite author.

excellent chapter but far too short, dont leaveus in suspense, cant wait for more

Once again, a great story. Can't wait to see Olivia eating Victoria!

I expect a quicker and lusty 4 th ! .....Are we clear my pet?

A fabulous story and the tension is building...how will Victoria have Olivia pleasure her. Can't wait for part four.

please hurry mistress!

definitely looking forward to the next part!

... but this story intrigued me and I will be watching for the next chapter. A good scene with Mommy and revenge on Olivia will be a satisfying (pun intended) read.

Very good stories, I like Victoria.

I hope that Victoria and Olivia are going to become lovers and to dominate theirs mothers.

this story is so good , i just can't wait to see what happens

This is too fantastic with so much more to happen to quit now. It's been 4 months and with you such a prolific writer it's making us concened. Please carry on!!!!

Wish i was fucked and licked by someone like this..... so fucking naughty and someone cleaning up my mess ... with her tongue ....

SO is Victoria is unoriginal and stealing Olivia's moves?

You need to slightly rename chapters as Catching Mommy Chapter 1, Catching Mommy Chapter 2, Catching Mommy Chapter 3 etcetera so Literotica lists them as separate chapters in an ongoing story .

The way they are now the chapters are only linked on your personal page. This means readers have to go to your personal page to find the next chapter rather then using the other chapters box on the last page of each chapter.

I loved this chapter. Agree with the comment about numbering them so one can follow consecutively.

169 loved it. Keeo up the good work.