by silkstockingslover
I loved this chapter. Agree with the comment about numbering them so one can follow consecutively.
You need to slightly rename chapters as Catching Mommy Chapter 1, Catching Mommy Chapter 2, Catching Mommy Chapter 3 etcetera so Literotica lists them as separate chapters in an ongoing story .
The way they are now the chapters are only linked on your personal page. This means readers have to go to your personal page to find the next chapter rather then using the other chapters box on the last page of each chapter.
Wish i was fucked and licked by someone like this..... so fucking naughty and someone cleaning up my mess ... with her tongue ....
This is too fantastic with so much more to happen to quit now. It's been 4 months and with you such a prolific writer it's making us concened. Please carry on!!!!
Very good stories, I like Victoria.
I hope that Victoria and Olivia are going to become lovers and to dominate theirs mothers.
... but this story intrigued me and I will be watching for the next chapter. A good scene with Mommy and revenge on Olivia will be a satisfying (pun intended) read.
A fabulous story and the tension is building...how will Victoria have Olivia pleasure her. Can't wait for part four.
I expect a quicker and lusty 4 th ! .....Are we clear my pet?
excellent chapter but far too short, dont leaveus in suspense, cant wait for more
Too bad it's onlt 2 pages at a time. It takes so little time to read.
I can't wait to see how she'll play Olivia.
Great stuff, though try and make the chapters a little longer please, the suspense is agony ;-) xx
Yet another great story that keeps the readers, including me, begging for the next chapter. Please don't make us wait too long!!
only one problem, the chapters are too short lol, need to know rest ASAP
Can't wait! I hope she "plays Olivia" to the tune of shoving 10+ inches of bitch-taming strap-on up Olivia's ass! That elistist bitch needs to pay!
Love it!