All Comments on 'Catching the Eye of a Mob Boss Ch. 01'

Short but interesting start.Eager to read how the story unfolds

There's something curiously compelling about this initial foray. Keep 'em cumming!

MORE PLEASE!!!!

It's different and that makes me curious to read more. Perhaps the next chapter could be a little longer?

What a start......On edge waiting for more

True, this is delightfully different. I hope not heavy BDSM though, or you will lose me. Looking forward to reading more and longer chapters. Not sure if you are a new author, but you will find invariably on Lit that the highest rated stories are the ones with consistently at least 3 pages per chapter. Perhaps take more time and make the chapters longer.

Very interesting start. I also agree, I like chapters to be at least in the 2 to 4 page range.... But!, beggars can't be choosers and I'll will be happy with whatever you release for this story.

The next chapter will be short as well and does not have any sex, However I can promise that the third chapter will be much longer and have a hopefully compelling sex scene. On the bdsm note, it will not be harsh or violent as much as a game in control.

I like the start, can't wait for the next part. Thank you

Looking forward to the next chapter

The Italian mob kills any of its members found to be gay. That's a big deal for them. They see it as weakness. They'd never let one become Don.

I do not know as much about the mob as I probably should. But then again this is a fantasy.....