by Her11
I do not know as much about the mob as I probably should. But then again this is a fantasy.....
The Italian mob kills any of its members found to be gay. That's a big deal for them. They see it as weakness. They'd never let one become Don.
I like the start, can't wait for the next part. Thank you
The next chapter will be short as well and does not have any sex, However I can promise that the third chapter will be much longer and have a hopefully compelling sex scene. On the bdsm note, it will not be harsh or violent as much as a game in control.
Very interesting start. I also agree, I like chapters to be at least in the 2 to 4 page range.... But!, beggars can't be choosers and I'll will be happy with whatever you release for this story.
True, this is delightfully different. I hope not heavy BDSM though, or you will lose me. Looking forward to reading more and longer chapters. Not sure if you are a new author, but you will find invariably on Lit that the highest rated stories are the ones with consistently at least 3 pages per chapter. Perhaps take more time and make the chapters longer.
It's different and that makes me curious to read more. Perhaps the next chapter could be a little longer?
There's something curiously compelling about this initial foray. Keep 'em cumming!