All Comments on 'Catching the Eye of a Mob Boss Ch. 03'

I definitely like that you made it a little longer this time. I hope you keep up writing and posting, I can't wait to see what happens next.

If you don't have an editor/beta reader you could consider getting one. Your writing is really good, but there is still room to make it even better, grammatically and otherwise.

Keep up the good work!

Great build up am wanting more

great build up to the best part......very hot

So much potential. You should have maybe given a warning about the BDSM. I wouldn't have read if I'd have known it was going to be some weird gay versions of 50 shades.

Need more...what happens between the two of them, its too good not to finish. Loved it

First 2 parts were a little short, but they actually give a good build up to this EXCELLENT third part. Please have a part 4 (and 5 and 6)...

And I’m out. Not down with rape.

Super hot! I loved the way Jace enjoyed the fuck. I do hope you will try and find an editor to catch some of the spelling errors.