All Comments on 'Cathy's Mistake Ch. 01'

and a very good read

gyrl loves a good blackmail story and hopes it gets more and more intense

awesome story please continue with the story

the day you write the last part, just release the dvd and make the most humiliation you can imagine!

a sexy girl in a position that she can't say no.

Great start!! I can't imagine what else she is going to have to do.... and to whom!!! Next chapter please......

This has the potential to be a great story but it needs some careful editing. An example is as follows - 'leaving menaced, dishevelled and saturated with his sperm' ... All it needed was the word 'me' included and it would have read better and made sense. I usually print my story off and read out loud and this way errors start to leap off the page. I may do 15 or twenty drafts like this until I am satisfied. Keep writing your imagination is great