All Comments on 'Caught'

You need to find yourself an editor. You have sentences that just terminate part way through, jumbled together ideas, impossible situations where characters would have to break in half or occupy the same space as physical objects. Decent enough first draft I suppose.

More, please

Yessir. Just you’re a little boy fantasizing about brutality. And

Misogamy squared. Got chew bitch. Yeah give it to her...

Jesus this sickens me

You see you can actually tell the same story with some sensuality

dash of humiliation - her having to the photos. Then we might get turned on too.

Instead; I suspect a school fantasy of a young man who never had real sex, and was never an athlete. We offer you our empathy. Find therapist. Go. Ug

But you could use an editor, badly. Also ignore the anon person who is clearly in denial about their feelings lmfao they read a story obviously about rape BY CHOICE and then were so angry they enjoyed it that they got pissed. Nobody forced you to read it 🙄