All Comments on 'Caught in the Rain Ch. 01'

Okay, your beginning has me intrigued. I will for sure come back.

Hope the story lives up to the slow build you've promised. The progression of intensity of their bdsm play and relationship will be most enjoyable if it is an exploration, not something instantaneous. They may have already known each other somewhat, but they are starting at the beginning on this new way of knowing each other.

Nice start - 5 for effort and bravery

Looking forward to future installments. Very nice opening. Keep it slow and sexy.

I like the intriguing opening. It was nice that you warned about the slow opening so that I was no expecting too much, but you left me wanting to know more. The two characters are both well drawn and feel like real people.

I want more Haha. But honestly very tastefully done. Well written and nice build up.

Can we have the next chapter please? 💦😶

Any girl who didnt realize she had a submissive trapped inside, just did in this story. Delectable.

This was incredible!!!!!

I keep checking back for a new installment! Hurry before I write it myself

Please don't stop writing this story it's amazing.

Please write more

Any plans for the next chapter? I hope so.

Do we get to see more of these two?? Even just another glimpse would be delicious.

This was so great. Wish we could see more!

Great set up, please continue 😊😊

I keep coming back to this story, hoping you've added another chapter. I love this first part and I'm desperate to know more

it's 2021 and i still think about this........