All Comments on 'Caught on Video'

by jobelle

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abob1abob1about 9 years ago
A great start

Please continue....would love to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
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Maybe if this becomes a series, a condom could break, and Annabelle would conceive a child. Then she could drop out of college, and then go work at a burger joint. Fast forward a couple of years, then she could appear on the "Maury" show, as she will need to find out who the baby's father is.

The guys could drop in for burgers while Annabelle is hard at work, getting paid $4.00 an hour. They could laugh at her and toss used paper cups at her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great First Story

Great story for a first. Will keep an eue on your future writtings. Keep it up

WatcherRobWatcherRobover 8 years ago
Sick

This is a drug induced rape. She has the evidence. The guys should be arrested and serve time. Sick!

boyzeepartyboyzeepartyalmost 7 years ago
Not every opinion is valid!

That is probably why it is in the reluctance/none consent categorie! The writer clearly knows it's fantasy and they have put it in the correct category.

AnnalovesitAnnalovesitabout 1 year ago

Waiting to see what to see what Annabelle gets up to next!

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