by Olddirtyman
Loved it alot had everything taboo left me drawing conclusions like ex wife moving back in visions of fun sex in every possible way loved the cincinnatti twist
A beautiful, well-thought-out story. All four characters well realized. And good hot sex to boot. Let there be 5s!
Very impressed! I don't usually care for cuckolding (it hits a little too close to my deepest fears), but this actually worked for me. I very much appreciated how the characters all developed quite a bit of depth as the story unfolded, and how everyone -- even the ostensible "villain" -- turned out to really care about each other. Great work!
Everything you write turns into a cuck creampie eating fantasy by the end. Won't bother even reading your shit ever again.
Wow another hot story directed to the cold showers by its writer. Maybe I'm in the minority, but if I'm reading a story about a kid banging his outrageously stacked and horny mother and step mother, the last thing I'd want is to bring ol sissy daddy on over to lap up my swimmer colony out of my moms love tunnel.
Hell, I quit stories if any other dude is brought in, no matter if they are good characters or not or straight.
Disappointed big time. In the story and in humanity.