All Comments on 'Cedar Hill Cheerleaders Ch. 01'

First half was good, up until they had sex up against the car. That would have been a great place to end the story. Continuing after that seemed to just be an excuse to add unnecessary sex scenes, which did nothing to increase the erotic appeal. More is not always better.

These two are very extroverted and into exhibitionism. For youngish people maybe too much 😊

The fact that you haven't tried it in public yourself doesn't give you the right to tell those who have that it's not possible.

Edit and proof read. Disjointed writing. Could not follow the plot, what ever it was. Is that why no one has left a comment in seven years? Consider rewriting and editing series. It's high school any thing can happen.