All Comments on 'Celine'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
A good start

Taking it slow. Now that he has been initialed, Celine will be able to have him progress through the appropriate stages. Asian women are very clever and he will give in to his secret desire to please her. Keep writing and stay real

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
more

I want to know more.....what happens next?

oneofthegirlsoneofthegirlsover 13 years ago
wanting more

I like your stories.. I wish there were more of them and they lasted a little longer too! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More

Will Celine dress him in more of her clothes?

JD2100JD2100about 12 years ago
yes more please

so hot. i love all your stories and hope we see some chapter 2s. because i can't get enough

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
perfect short story

I liked the short story. I hope their will come some more stories !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Shaky

Spelling is atrocious, but the story is cute. Maybe expand all three of this author's stories to something erotic rather than just descriptions?

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