All Comments on 'Centaurs in Springtime Ch. 01'
by Karnonnos
- 16 Comments
Anonymousover 8 years agoWhy would her husband shame her for something she has no control over? He clearly can't control his own reaction either since he dropped. I also don't understand why he would leave her alone when he made a rule that mares must listen to their males when their in heat. He clearly knows that she won't be able to control herself.
LilMissNerd1over 8 years agoVery well written. I admire the storyline as well as the fact that you included pieces of truth in the story. You have a great deal of promise and look forward to reading more of your work.
Anonymousover 8 years agothis storyline is very interesting. I never read anything about centaur mating^^ you should do another chapter^^
Anonymousabout 8 years agoGreat start, please follow up with more. Your writing style/quality is very good
Anonymousover 7 years agoReally unique, I didn't think I'd like it but I did! Great story, very well written. Hope to see more. Only thing that seemed a little strange is that the centaur named John... Lol, it's just funny because all the others seem to have fantasy names like Bellamy xD
Anonymousover 7 years agoPlz update ur writing is so awesome and I got so horny reading it, bout to go finger myself. I sigh and wish I could be in Annas place
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