All Comments on 'Chained Freedom'

Keep writing!

I loved it and I so wanted more. Plese write more about them together I loved it,

Keep up the awsome writing

Jessica

to see 2 friends take the next step is always a good one. You did very well on this. i would like to see more of the couple as their journey continues.

wench

this one had me wishing for the fantasy

i think this is only the beginning for them and that you need to continue to let us spy on their journey. i will be waiting for more.

tez