by techsan
Needs more chapters. Linda seems to be welcoming a bit more of you than previously planned, perhaps a little more to this story may develop where another human being could develop between the two of you, in this fantasy setting?
I thought at first it was one with the other husband would try to steal the other wife away from the other husband but i was wrong you have great story you get high marks .
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga
I liked the way the story developed. Each chapter was in itself complete and most satisfying to the reader.. I injected myself into the story and sexually satisfied myself. Thank you for sharing.