All Comments on 'Change is Good Ch. 03'

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don87654don87654almost 19 years ago
Good, but could have been better

Needs more chapters. Linda seems to be welcoming a bit more of you than previously planned, perhaps a little more to this story may develop where another human being could develop between the two of you, in this fantasy setting?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good Work

I thought at first it was one with the other husband would try to steal the other wife away from the other husband but i was wrong you have great story you get high marks .

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
change is indeed good

I liked the way the story developed. Each chapter was in itself complete and most satisfying to the reader.. I injected myself into the story and sexually satisfied myself. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Photos?

I thought this site had pictures!!!

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Real married couples don't need others for play time.

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