by spectacularfreak
Don't know why but this story has me wanting more of it and soon, nicely done.
Great start to your story, looking forward to more soon.
OMG... I wish it was longer. I wanted to keep reading then to find it ended like that keeps me in suspense. I'm itching to know what's going to happen. Can't wait for the next chapter
This is my first story, and your encouragement has been really helpful, I'll try to get the next chapter out as soon as possible.
-naomi
Haven't commented on a Lit story in quite some time, but this was excellent!!! Looking forward to see what unfolds.
this is really good. I'm looking forward to the next update, so don't keep me waiting for too long. lol Great job!
This is an auspicious start to your writing here. Most interesting beginning.